Alright haven't done much these days so just posting this. Do tell if the first person point of view I write sounds too retarded.
This is a first draft so expect many mistakes in grammar etc.
Mirror Moon
Black Snow Miracle/Kuroi Yuki Kiseki
Chapter 1: The child of Alice
Knock knock knock.
Rapid knocking on the door of my room echos throughout my room,instantly pulling me out of my sleep.
“Room Service Sir!” A Female voice calls from outside my room. Streaks of light slid from below the curtains into my otherwise dark room. The female voice called out again. Awakened I turned and rolled off the bed,face meeting the cold hard ground. Sharp pain shot from my nose into my brain instantly wiping out all sleep from my body. I drag myself across the room clutching my nose and pull the door open for the server.
“Good morning sir. I have brought your breakfast.”The server greets me politely and I stepped aside as she pushes a cart carrying food into my room. Picking up a plate of scrambled eggs & ham, she placed it onto the table in my room along with a knife and fork. Saliva swims into my mouth as the fragrance of freshly fried eggs enters my nose. I look away from the dish and follow behind the server as she pushes the cart back out of my room.
"Have your breakfast quickly. We will be arriving at Neviora shortly.” She bows and move on to the other passengers. I shut the door and walk towards my breakfast. I pull back the curtains,letting the morning sun into the dark room.
Neviora huh?...How many times has it been? I can't even remember the number of times I have been on a train journeying towards a new 'life' as they call it. Its just all a bunch irresponsible lies. I don't even know why those relatives of mine even decided to adopt me in the first place if they are so afraid of me and look so glad when another pair of relatives decided to adopt me. What. Are they playing musical chairs? Just trying to appear benevolent I believe... I pick up the utensils and proceeds onto devour my breakfast. Soon the first sighting of a building comes into sights from outside the windows and then the speakers attached onto the ceiling blared into life for the first time on this trip.
"Dear Passengers please listen. There is a teenage girl here found without a ticket. She claimed to have lost her train ticket when her luggage fell out of the window but that her family is on this train with her. So would the family members of Tohruyi Litness please make their way to the front now and confirm this.
What. What's with that retarded sounding reason? Hmm...I guess I'll go have a look. I swing the door open and step onto the soft carpet floor underneath. Strange. I look around and find that no other doors are opening. Confuse I slide open the sliding door and enter the front carriage of the train.
"There he is! That person is my brother! Over Here!” A feminine voice shouts out. I look towards the direction the voice came from.
What. Okay wait. Is that girl like...Pointing and waving at me? What the heck? At the other end of the carriage stands a pretty teenage girl with long beautiful brown hair smiling as if she knows me.
Three Kara no Kyoukai er....Books/Graphic Novels? 
